tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3600397408385236913.post1580651434051720909..comments2008-05-29T16:53:57.487-04:00Comments on Danny Boy's Blog: Gendered Consumers/Engendering ConsumerismDanny Boyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12359191650718471264noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3600397408385236913.post-82459778457563066382008-05-24T19:52:00.000-04:002008-05-24T19:52:00.000-04:00Nice job with your first blog post Dan! It's a go...Nice job with your first blog post Dan! It's a good analysis of the toys in relation to the pieces you've cited. I would like to see you have a bit clearer thesis that gets to the heart of the writing's focus. One other minor issue is that the parenthetical citations need to have the period after the citation. ie:<BR/>Unfortunately, children whose behavior doesn’t conform to generally accepted standards of gender are subject to ridicule or worse” (Newman 115).<BR/>Other than that, nice work here!!!<BR/>:o)<BR/>JessieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00882202558089495129noreply@blogger.com